There are many things that i would like to inscribe on my belt if i was able to design my own belt. First, on the end of the belt by the buckle, I would put the number 7. This number has been my lucky number since I was born. It has proven to be very lucky for me, and it means a lot. the next thing that I would put would be a key. I would put this symbol because I moved when I was nine years old. After that, I would put some water and fish. I have been swimming since I was four years old and its is my favorite sport. I would then paint the color blue on a large portion on the belt because it is my favorite color. On top of the blue coloring, I would write the word family because my family is so important in my life. JC would be the next thing inscribed into my belt. Coming to this school has made me a more mature and responsible person, and I never want to forget how important education is in my life. I would also add my initials E.N.P. My full name is Emily Nicole Patrick. I was named after my great grandmother. Her name is Emiko. The last thing that I would write on my belt is the word friends. If I didn’t have friends to be with me in my life and share my joy, I don’t know what I would do. Thanks so much for reading my blog!!!!! Until next time.
Awwww. You're blog is so cute and straight to the point.
ReplyDeleteI liked your blog, but I think each symbol could've used more description. I really liked the symbols you chose though. I also like your pictures!!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading this Emily! It kept me very interested the whole time I was reading it! Nice Job!!
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ReplyDeleteExcellent blogging for third quarter! Your Belt and Hawaii blogs are excellent. They are detailed and tell a lot about you and your interests. Your other blogs have great detail too, but you need to do a little more proofreading. Watch "It's" when mean "it is." You might think about typing your blogs in Word first so that you can run spell/grammar check. Thank you for working so hard and sharing.
95/100 A
Also, always capitalize the pronoun"I."
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